Hah. We examined the capital you sent, and we sat around the massive round table that sits in our meeting room, and we argued the pros and the cons of the prose, and we decided the capital was not working TQRwise. Your crafting is spot on, and we like a good lengthy cap, but the ending does not make our monkey smile. I am sorry, but the good news is, if you place this cap anywhere else, and there are thousands of lit mags on the web, you will be accepted. The only reason we don't want to pay you money is because I am a bastard when comes to a capital close, an ending. I am a bastard.
Best of luck though I don't think you need it because your prose is solid,