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Re:WK 01.8
Date: 2017/09/13 20:05 By: doomey Status: Admin  
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That-

[doomey swaggers around the tiles, maybe drunk]

was awesome. best Porthole i've seen.

[doomey gathers himself, brushes the dirt from his lapels]

the girl is grilling, she's really up on top of things.

[he giggles]

and so i'm out. got so many contacts to meet, people to see.

[he goes toward the door, kicks it open]

there's a man in utah that's learned to control his electrical output. if only we could all do that. damn.

[and doomey walks out the door, slams it shut with his heel]
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Re:WK 01.8
Date: 2017/09/21 17:56 By: Jesus Status: Admin  
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[Jesus's lips are twisted. He's watching the trash can beside the cherrywood as it dances with flame. He reaches up and wipes his lips with his fingers. He looks over at Carol]

I was looking forward to enjoying the remainder of that Java, Miss.
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Re:WK 01.8
Date: 2017/09/21 18:10 By: carol Status: Admin  
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[Carol stands over the burning capital, her eyeliner tearing down her cheeks. She stands guardedly, on defense, and she glares at Jesus]

Tough fucking shit, God's son. You should be focused on these last days, not on cigars, eh? Remember what the big book said "There will be great earthquakes," in Luke 21:11, right? These are the last days, Jesus. Best you get busy.
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Re:WK 01.8
Date: 2017/09/21 18:26 By: Jesus Status: Admin  
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[Jesus steps up across the trash can from Carol]

Yeah, I don't really deal with any of that stuff. I'm just here to calm the riotous crowd, right? Here to usher the folks to their seats. But we've time before the real bad rain starts to fall. A few months, maybe. I'm just chilling till then. I don't have to get busy till I decide it's time to get busy, girlfriend. Meanwhile-

[Jesus holds up a scrolled capital in his left fist]

We've more capital to examine.

[He moves up beside the pilot's chair and spreads the current capital on the cherrywood's desktop. He leans in, palms on the desktop]

Something from a fella named Gareth Clark Mckay. The capital's entitled Something Borrowed, Something Blue. Let's just check this puppy out.

[Jesus scans the capital]
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Re:WK 01.8
Date: 2017/09/21 18:34 By: carol Status: Admin  
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Well, shit okay, but...the world needs you Jesus, 'cept I can't quite figure out what it is you can do that will help when cities continue to crumble. And there's the situation of race wars, right? You might want to consider manning up, Coming. But, hey, if we've time, we've time, right?

[Carol slaps her hip, and then she steps over to and plops her ass into the pilot's chair. She squares up and looks upon the current capital]
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Re:WK 01.8
Date: 2017/09/21 18:40 By: Jesus Status: Admin  
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[Jesus is focused, examining. He twitches his bushy lips, blinks]

Do you see that?
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Re:WK 01.8
Date: 2017/09/21 18:46 By: carol Status: Admin  
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[Carol squints]

Yeah. "I’d been living like for about a year..." right? Is this valley? Nar, Coming. That's not valley shit. That's a stumble. On one hand the line reads "I've been alive for about a year, more or less," but corrected it reads, "I'd been living like that for about a year..." and that makes alot more sense, eh? Right?
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Re:WK 01.8
Date: 2017/09/21 18:54 By: Jesus Status: Admin  
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Yeah, what I saw, right. Oh, and hey, look at this.

[Jesus taps a line of the capital with his fingertip]
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Re:WK 01.8
Date: 2017/09/21 18:58 By: carol Status: Admin  
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[Carol steers her eyes to the page Jesus tapped]

Man, you do examine fast. I must be a slow examiner.

[She examines the line tapped]

Oh, yeah. "It must’ve a been a while for her, as she sucked me for near-on an hour to get my coked-up cock into a rideable state." A fantastic line, 'cept for another fucking stumble. See, at this point, us editors just start to get pissed off, eh?
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Re:WK 01.8
Date: 2017/09/21 19:03 By: Jesus Status: Admin  
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Right. Irks us. And in case anyone is watching-

[Jesus looks around the Floor for the camera that only Boligard can see, but he can't locate it, so he looks mirrorballward]

The stumble was the "a" after the "must've". Just so we're clear, on the same page.
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