Examined the capital you sent us. Thanks for the send. Tell your friends. But, yeah, the monkey hung his head on this one. I get the feeling you're trying too hard. The sentences become fuddled as we examine, they don't sound right. As a crafter, it's your duty to sound natural. In my lingo, it's called "trips". If I'm tripping over myself over and over as I examine a capital, I've no choice but to Porthole. I figure you've got skill, but this capital is a tough one, the last thing a capital wants to be, savvy? Could be I'm wrong. Send it elsewhere.
Keep it unreal,
Boligard Doomey the Floor email@example.com
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